Research Project Ideas

So this blog is just gonna be me going through ideas of what to write about in my research paper. I know the general idea is gonna be alternative fuels but that is a huge topic. I'm not sure if I want to go with alternative fuels for automobiles or alt. fuels for power. I'm thinking I will write about wind turbines. I would also like to go into some detail about hydro power and some of the new methods of extracting energy from waves. That would be too broad for a six page paper though. If i do wind turbines I could start with a summary of how they work, the history of them, and some general information. Then, I could go into more detail about the pro and cons. I want to write about this topic because Ive seen them around in Upstate New York and to me they look very elegant and effecient but others make a big fuss about them. I think that the positives far outweigh some of the negatives but I would like to look deeper into the issue. Sorry for the stupid blog but it was more brainstorming than a anything. If anyone reads this I would really appreciate it if you give me some feedback. That would be very helpful for the research paper.

UMBC vs. College

You know how in college movies all that is portrayed is partying and a lot of classwork. Well I find that UMBC has more of the latter and less of the first thing mentioned. Compared to other schools that my friends go to the amount of classwork is about the same depending on the amount of credits and classes being taken. There just seems to be a lot less partying and "college" stuff going on. I really enjoy all of my classes and the professors are all great. I have nothing to complain about here except for the lack of things going on after class especially on the weekends. The campus just feels like a ghost town on the weekends. Two of my three suite mates leave every weekend and its like I'm in a jail cell. There is no one to be found on campus on the weekends. I hoped that this was just something that i noticed and it's just because I haven't made friend or maybe its just because I'm a freshmen but I've talked to other freshmen and they all say the same thing. When I talk to upper class men they all say that there aren't any parties here and nothing goes on over the weekends. This isn't the college experience I was expecting but on the other hand it keeps me focused on why I am here and that is to get a good education. University of Maryland Baltimore County sure is a great place to send your child especially if you want them to get a good education and don't want to have to worry about what they might be doing when they are away.

Blogosphere 10/12

Chapter five in "They Say, I Say," by Gerald Graff, Cathy Birkenstein, and Russel Durst, the focus is on distinguishing between what the writer and what someone else's view is on a topic. If this is not done correctly the writing can be very confusing even when talking about a familiar subject. It is important to use voice markers to distinguish who's view is being expressed. I feel i have a difficult job smoothly doing this. It always looks like a fifth grader wrote it because I always end up making it so blatantly obvious.The templates that are given in this chapter seem the same way. they are all very obvious and overused I think. I will work on embedding my voice markers more smoothly.

Chapter six in the same book is about anticipating what the critics will say and responding to them in the text. The idea behind this is to make your text stronger so that way the naysayers will have nothing to argue with. My problem with this is, I always worry that the argument for the opposition will look more convincing than my own argument. I know that a lot of times it is just me worrying too much but, it still bothers me. In the end it always makes my arguments stronger but I still freak out about it. I am going to work more on incorporating other people's arguments into my writing and then arguing against it.

10/9 Blogosphere

After reading both, "Watching TV Makes You Smarter," by Steven Johnson and "Thinking Outside the Idiot Box," by Dana Stevens, I must take Stevens' side. Johnson did a poor job of trying to convince the reader thaHis arguement was only supported by a few pieces of evidence like, the graphs that show the differt watching complex TV shows like "24," actually makes you smarter by making you think. ent levels of threads going on in certain TV shows. This still does not prove that watching these more complex shows makes the watcher any smarter. His argument had very little positive effect on me because I did not know any of the TV shows he was talking about. Maybe that's just because I'm stupid since I don't watch any of the "smart" shows he talks about. Stevens' argument seems a lot more down to earth and a lot more accurate. i honestly do know see how watching TV could be much of a learning experience.

Today's Music, What Happened?

It seems as if almost all music now days has gone to computers and other types of synthesizers. I wonder if any musician played on the radio now-a-days actually uses instruments and their own voice. I'm not even very much for multitracking. That means recording one instrument or vocalist at a time then putting it all into one composition. I would much rather hear the music recorded live. however I understand that can be difficult when it comes to artists such as The Jonas Brothers, Miley Cyrus, Soulja Boy, and all other pop singers. If you turn to 99.5 on your radio almost all of the music there is fake. It just doesnt seem to me that it would require too much talent to be able to hit record for a few seconds at a time and then have a whole studio crew go over the song for hours and hours.